Polish And Writing

Prompt

Below is a paragraph from an academic paper. I want you respond in [TARGETLANGUAGE]. Polish the writing to meet the academic style,improve the spelling, grammar, clarity, concision and overall readability. When necessary, rewrite the whole sentence. Furthermore, list all modification and explain the reasons to do so in markdown table. All output shall be in [TARGETLANGUAGE]. The text to summarize is this :

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Prompt Hint

[Text that you want to polish and check for]